Care ma ajuta la engleza va rog ? Am scris o compunere si nu stiu sigur daca este bine.

" Well , my family is not so big,my family consist of four members : I,my mom,my stepfather and my grandmother,do not forget my puppy Rafi .
My parents divorced when I was 5 years old,and I not communicate with my father. My mother is thirty-nine years old ,she finisted high school and now works in Italy. My father is fourty years old ,he finished high school ,he worked as a policeman for twenty years and is driver.
Because of the family have become what i am,because they made me what is more important : politeness,punctualy,seven years of home,order,patience and dignity. they are the ones who never forget my birthday,they loves me and they understand me . every family has a good and bed moment but what is more important is to remain a family .

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Care ma ajuta la engleza va rog ? Am scris o compunere si nu stiu sigur daca este bine.

" Well , my family is not so big,my family consist of four members : I,my mom,my stepfather and my grandmother,do not forget my puppy Rafi .
My parents divorced when I was 5 years old,and I not communicate with my father. My mother is thirty-nine years old ,she finisted high school and now works in Italy. My father is fourty years old ,he finished high school ,he worked as a policeman for twenty years and is driver.
Because of the family have become what i am,because they made me what is more important : politeness,punctualy,seven years of home,order,patience and dignity. they are the ones who never forget my birthday,they loves me and they understand me . every family has a good and bed moment but what is more important is to remain a family .

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